Manga test page 03

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Main character info: [link]
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I've made few pages of my manga. I'm too busy to continue it now, I just wanted to show the pages to you - I'm curious if you like my style of drawing manga or not.
Besides it was a time for me to practice and to get to know if I'll manage to create my idea.
It took me nearly whole day to finish those few pages (having lots of breaks, computer bug).